My Father - 2 Poem by Subhas Chandra Chakra

My Father - 2

Rating: 5.0


Oh Papa....
You defined
Almost all our
Alphabets of life.
You fingered on the
Strings of our hearts
With different notes.
You dipped our souls
Into fluids of cosmic desires,
In the vastness of the universe !

You painted the petals
Of our minds with colours -
Unique,
Distinct,
Elegant and
Full of delicate feelings,
Full of aesthetic beauty,
Full of life, full of passion,
Full of love, full of compassion
For each and every soul next door.

Sunday, June 19, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: love and life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Prativa Rani 07 December 2017

ou dipped our souls Into fluids of cosmic desires, In the vastness of the universe! Beautiful line. Thanks for it. 10+++++ Rani

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 15 February 2018

Rani, Thanks dear for the beautiful remarks and encouragement.

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Prativa Rani 07 December 2017

You dipped our souls Into fluids of cosmic desires, In the vastness of the universe! Beautiful line. Thanks for it.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 15 February 2018

Rani dear, Thanks dear for the beautiful remarks and encouragement.

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Seema Sharma Rimi 04 July 2016

ou painted the petals Of our minds with colours - Unique, Distinct, Elegant and Full of delicate feelings, Full of aesthetic beauty, Full of life, full of passion, Full of love, full of compassion For each and every soul next door. Really beautiful an ode.10+ for this poem. Thanks.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 19 November 2017

Thanks dear Rini for the beautiful remarks and these inspiration.

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Sabita Sahoo 30 June 2016

You painted the petals Of our minds with colours - Unique, Distinct, Elegant and Full of delicate feelings, Full of aesthetic beauty, Full of life, full of passion, Full of love, full of compassion For each and every soul next dodoor. Nicely written about a great father.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 19 November 2017

Thanks dear Sabita for the beautiful remarks and these inspiration.

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Edward Kofi Louis 22 June 2016

Unique! With colours. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 19 November 2017

Thank you Sir for the beautiful remarks and these inspiration.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra

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Sainkul, Anandapur, Odisha, India
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