My Face Poem by Akhtar Jawad

My Face

Rating: 5.0


A mirror with an image truly effective,
Within no time it became too defective,
A lie damaged my reflection.
In telling lies politician's perfection!
His face looks more and more attractive.

Wednesday, August 29, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: face
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rini shibu 29 August 2018

Excellent write on how lies can make defective image

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Bernard F. Asuncion 30 August 2018

Akhtar, such a powerful poem....10++++¥¥

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Kumarmani Mahakul 31 August 2018

Wonderful imaginary and imagery. Well penned.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 30 August 2018

A short powerful write on politicians. A great satire. Brilliantly penned.10

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 30 August 2018

nice comparison I have observed since so many read you you don't answer in return well still we will read such an intelligent conversation emanating sir from your mind's ink

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Kelly Kurt 30 August 2018

A clever, multifaceted write.

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Dr Antony Theodore 30 August 2018

Fine reflecton my dear Akhtar. face, politics, reflection, then and now...... very nice. thank u dear Akhtar.. tony

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