My Dream World Poem by Howard Johnson
My Dream World
I build my castles every day....
And tear them down, again in such a way,
And it is quite a wondrous way to play,
When life is hard and full of pain,
I have my world..
My very, very own,
Where I just love to be alone,
For there I sit without a care
And float upon thin, thin air..
Howard...Your dream world sounds like a wonderful place to escape to...I guess we all in our own way...have our dream worlds...enjoy yours...it's there to provide you with mental and emotional rest! Hugs, Dee
Hmm.clever...I have read your poem a few times now and i cant figure..at first your dream world seems like a perfect place to be..but thats not the feeling I get reading your poem...interesting..I like your poem-Pia
Now this I like, a very enjoyable etheral feel to it, as though flooting on a cloud Wonderfull Love duncan X
Very well written. I really like the symbolism used. Thank you
'Where I just love to be alone, ' - Do not worry, from it poets are ill... Tsira
This is a gorgeously well-crafted little poem. I love the opening, building castles every day and then tearing them down, such symbolism.
I love the poem Howard very good. i'm sorry, I'm in school at the moment so i can't finish commenting every poem so i'll tell you know that i love all your poems. They are very moving and very well written. Please feel free to check my poems out. Samantha Lynn<333
Our dream world is a wonderful place to escape to and just relax. Like this a lot! Howard............All the best, Diane
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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Sounds like a divine place to go, the peaceful palce, thanks for sharing. Patricia