My Choclate Poem by Luwi Habte

My Choclate

Rating: 4.5


My sweet chocolate which I own it sudden
I am scared that it might be finished soon
Because its taste is pretty secreted on

You are so delicious which gives happiness to my soul
Rather than me, even other people are said so
They keep on telling that you are so sweet of all

I will take good care of you my chocolate
Because you are the one as sweet as honey more
You are the best from the stuffs created on

A lot of are trying to eat my chocolate
And some are asking to let them know your taste
But how it can be? Let they don’t think of it
I am really sorry for them but I am the owner of my chocolate! ! !

My sweet chocolate!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mubeen Sadhika 02 September 2009

Innocent feeling is really captured very nicely. Good to read. deserves 10+

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Elaine Oxamendi Vicet 20 May 2009

Decadent chocolate..yet the importance of guarding that which is precious rings clear here

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