Music Of Breaths Poem by Akhtar Jawad

Music Of Breaths

Rating: 5.0


Having passed the critical moment
independent of my mother's breaths,
I cried for the reasons not known to me.
Having fallen in love,
when I noticed a music in my breaths,
I smiled for the reasons not known to me.
I am an ignorant man,
I cried where I should have smiled,
and I smiled where I should have cried!

Friday, January 13, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: life,love,music
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Antony Theodore 17 April 2018

I cried for the reasons not known to me. Having fallen in love, when I noticed a music in my breaths, ...there are so many things i do not know in me. i ask why and i do not find an answer.. very nice thought dear great poet Akhtar.. tony

0 0 Reply
Edward Kofi Louis 20 January 2017

Critical moment! Thanks for sharing.

0 0 Reply
Khalid Saifullah 13 January 2017

What a poem! ...............................................................................

0 0 Reply
READ THIS POEM IN OTHER LANGUAGES
Close
Error Success