Mosh Pit Poem by Gary Revel

Mosh Pit

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In the mosh pit
They thrust and drive
Pound and tumble
Fall and die

Suffer pain
To feel the life
That flows and ebbs
Within the strife

In the mosh pit
They find the reason
They live to die
They love to die
To live
In the mosh pit

In the mosh pit
They feel the blood
Flow through their veins
They feel alive
In death's refrain
In the mosh pit
They pray
God

Mosh Pit
Monday, June 21, 2004
Topic(s) of this poem: dancing
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
It happens in the Mosh Pit
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sal Carter 07 November 2005

long live the pit. has this dude ever actually moshed though?

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Gary Revel

Gary Revel

Florala, Alabama USA
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