Better to pretend
Than write poems
On what happens.
This is technically a Senryu. I have made the same mistake. It is a good Senryu tho. Thanks, Atri
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
There is no syllabic difference 5-7-5. Senryu are more about human nature whereas Haiku are about mother nature