Morality Poem by Atri Mazumder

Morality



Better to pretend
Than write poems
On what happens.

Friday, July 22, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: morality
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kelly Kurt 23 July 2016

There is no syllabic difference 5-7-5. Senryu are more about human nature whereas Haiku are about mother nature

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Kelly Kurt 22 July 2016

This is technically a Senryu. I have made the same mistake. It is a good Senryu tho. Thanks, Atri

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Atri Majumder 23 July 2016

Thanks...what is the syllabic difference?

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