Mom- I Love U. Poem by shyam balaji

Mom- I Love U.



The time when I laid on your laps, mother,
of the outside world I lest bother
That's time I was four.
You bet me, chided me, advised me,
That was all in the world I knew.
I cared in this world for nothing
except to ride a bicycle I had training
That was time I was nine.
I found the world a mystery,
for you provided me the glossary.
Unknowing what causes why I found myself crazy
for then you taught me the lessons of life
That's time I was eleven.
Clearing all the downsides of me,
with a pride eye you see.
Now I learnt the world well mother
to write a poem on you, the words slither
and its time I am sixteen.
Thy soul being yours, I find
Thou art is so kind.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dulakshi Wakista 20 February 2010

You've expressed and showed the bond of mother and child.Very lovely and heart touching poem.Indeed it's a great work.No one compare mother love to another. Great work! Nice piece.

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Sneha 'The Poetess' 17 February 2010

any poem written on the beauty of motherhood shud be applauded! ! ..... :) there's no love poem, nature poem, or even grievance poems that can come as close to wat a poem on motherhood can! ...

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Bistirna Barua 25 December 2008

a moving poem just like the song MAA in taare zameen par. Shyam really you are a poetical genius such fantastic word selection yet you retain the soul of the poem, your simplicity binds me.you rock

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Vidhya 01 23 December 2008

wonderful........very good work.........i really enjoyed ur poem......

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