Missing You Poem by Dan Jones

Missing You

Rating: 5.0


The things I did to be with you
Some things I thought I'd never do
These shameful things only make me see
Just how selfish I can be
But after all this time I still regret
Not speaking the truth and those i upset
That one short month I can honestly say
Was the best of my life to this day
All the looks, hugs, kisses we shared
Were beyond the most hopeful dreams I dared
Even the times when we would just sit
Alone together and our eyes were lit
With the happiness we had together back then
Before I messed up my life again
As I write this tears smear the ink
I wipe them off and try to think
What I could have been or could have done
To keep us together like the moon and sun
As I sit here alone in this empty room
All I can think is that I'm missing you

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
RyuOh Kenshin 20 August 2007

Nice poem, it has a lot emotion in it and you capture the essence of missing someone dearly.

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Melvina Germain 20 August 2007

I like this 'Missing You' poem, heartfelt thoughts stated here, you paint a sad picture indeed, excellent poem Dan.--Melvina--

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