Men At War Poem by duke perry abrokwa

Men At War

Rating: 5.0


War Zone
Dust up, sounds of deadly bullets and bombs,
Triggers squeezed, blood spills, it's the combat zone.
Soldiers at war, I don't wanna fight, I just wanna go home,
I have a 6-month-old baby I have not yet seen.
I don't want her to grow up without me.

Boom boom, so close to death, call it the danger zone.
Call the medic, my buddy just lost his legs.
Adrenaline rushing through my veins,
My hand is cut off, yet I can't feel the pain.
It will never end, it's all just the beginning.
Scared, dismayed, yet not afraid,
I might be destined to go this way,
But it might not be this day.

So silence, I see both sides falling,
It's noisy, shouting, and crying,
Yet I am in the silence zone.
The next is the beep-beep sound,
A mysterious voice says, 'Stay with me,
The medics are here.'
It sounds familiar, but too deep in to think.

I pray, if I take my last breath,
Please let my wife know 'I love her, '
Please let my baby know 'I am sorry, '
And my mom know 'I was a hero.'
It's the Death Zone.

Men At War
Sunday, October 28, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: army,military service,war veterans,memorial day
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
MilliteryThe poem 'Men At War' appears to be a piece of creative writing that reflects the experiences of soldiers in a combat zone. The poet vividly describes the chaos and danger of war, including the sounds of gunfire and explosions, the injuries suffered by soldiers, and the fear of not surviving. The poem also conveys the longing of soldiers to return home to their loved ones and the pain of being separated from family, particularly a newborn child. The final lines of the poem suggest a moment of uncertainty and confusion as the speaker is attended to by medics. Overall, the poem effectively captures the physical and emotional toll of war on those who fight it.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rose Marie Juan-austin 14 June 2020

A powerful and touching write Great imagery that portrays the true story of a great soldier at the brink of death in a war zone. Beautifully written.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 14 June 2020

What a deeply moving poem. The effects of war that it brings to humanity is beyond measure. It is a vicious cycle of violence. It takes away human lives, wrecks home and country and ultimately the whole humanity.

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Dave Walker 28 October 2018

War is an horrible thing, I can't imagine how it is for the Hero's who have to fight in it, a very touching poem.

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