Me & You Poem by Poet Dragon

Me & You



If you can see my sorrow
If you can see my fear
If you can see tomorrow
I hope it's not too drear

I hope it isn't raining
I hope it's free of war
I hope nobody's dying
I see you know for sure

I see the sun is setting
I see the stars appear
I see the dancing Northern Lights
I know that night is here

I know you see my secrets
I know you see my tears
I know you watch me day and night
I feel you know my fears

I feel your eyes upon me
I feel your loving gaze
I wonder how you still see me
through all this smog and haze

-Written at 16

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

I'd say it's amazing that you wrote this so young. But the talent in youth can be stunning. What I really like about this particular piece is how easily it reads out loud. The lines are very smooth, no bumps or words that don't quite flow. It's a quick read with a lot said.

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Pine Bluff, AR
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