Masquerade Poem by Dee Daffodil

Masquerade

Rating: 5.0


She came to the ball
Not to dance
Nor was she looking for
A frivolous romance

But she needed to find him
To unmask him
And remind him
That she was his...

Should he dare to chance...

Dee Daffodil (HW) 08 March,2007

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

oooh.... I like this. Devillishly intriguing and, hmmn, methinks many a woman will know just what you mean.... grand. t x

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Chuck Audette 02 April 2007

Liked the flow of the rhymes in this and the story is great, too! 10! -chuck

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Diane Violet 12 March 2007

An intriguing piece Dee...I like how you put it together...well done! Hugs, Diane

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Duncan Wyllie 10 March 2007

Us guys can often hide behind a mask, not knowing that in actual fact, although more risky, to come out from behind the mask is the only way to be Great writing Dee Love duncan X

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Zen Bojczuk 08 March 2007

Behind protecting masks we often hide When to remove is …so hard to decide. As we remove ours, what will we see? Me uncovering you ~ you discovering me. Zen

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Cecil (cj) Krieger 08 March 2007

How profound Dee Daffodil... how profound

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