Marking Time Poem by Edmund V. Strolis

Marking Time

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The scars, made jagged by regret
Are never to heal for these poor souls
When a twisted branch on the tree of life cuts them
Leaving a forever echo where words only buzz and hiss

They are true warriors in perpetual battle with the void
One wanders a wasteland while another polishes her armor
Twins sharing a nightmare alone, kindred watchers of the clock
Marking time every day, every hour, every second.

Marking Time
Sunday, October 9, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: courage,grief,hope,loss,survival
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
For those men and women who have paid the worst price of all and lost a child. Whatever internal fortitude they may muster to face the day is lost upon the rest of us.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Madathil Rajendran Nair 16 October 2016

Your note has been very helpful in understanding this poem. You have captured the pathos of the situation so strikingly that it keeps haunting the reader. Do you think we can place this poem in the modern genre? (10)

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Edward Kofi Louis 09 October 2016

No matter what we do face in life, let us always give praises to the Creator Almighty. Thanks for sharing.

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