Make Me Immortal Poem by Mohammad Akmal Nazir

Make Me Immortal

Rating: 5.0


In this dark world of disappointment,
I lit a flare of hope,
But the storm of emotions let it go,
Now It's only thee,
Come and lit my world
With the light of thy being,
I'm dying with the desire of thy glimpse,
Come and make me immortal with thy soft touch,
Or what else is there for me
To celebrate my sorrow?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
C.R. Clark 22 July 2011

One has said this poem has a beautiful tone and that it does. I like it. I believe we can have immortality But, In the spiritual sense not the physical. Thanks Richard

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Come and make me immortal with thy soft touch, Or what else is there for me To celebrate my sorrow? illusory wish by human being and God knows what can happen if he has been made immortal... lovely wish but never agreed by almighty....10

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Rekha Mandagere 15 July 2011

God gave all jewels to man but to balance the world he made him mortal! Friend, if you ask him to make us immortal, how can we solve the population problem on earth? Immortality for only good one's. I give 10 marks for its beautiful tone.

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Mohammad Akmal Nazir

Mohammad Akmal Nazir

Bahraich, U.P. India
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