Loving Is The Only Heaven Poem by Dónall Dempsey

Loving Is The Only Heaven

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You pad across
the white tile floor

almost animal

your beauty
something only you
could tame

I have to raise my arm against it
as you come out of the sun

wearing only my white silk shirt

blown gracefully
against your curves

the shirt billowing behind you

as if
you were an angel
with folded wings

each step
a thing of wonder

lost in thought

as if you had taken – a wrong turning
& seemed surprised to be

here
stranded

kissing this human

who seems to know

that loving
is the only Heaven.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Scarlett Treat 24 April 2008

Tender heaven inspired with an earth touch...heaven translated into earth words!

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Dee Dee Wright 22 April 2008

This is really beautiful and tender. I love the way the ideas keep on morphing from one concept to another...from the feline graceful beautiful animal to the idea of an angel and then as if she were a real angel...a very elegant parabola of thought. I love the title in itself and how it hits home in the last line. Love also the notion of her beauty being something only she could tame. Great poem...really love it.

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Original Unknown Girl 22 April 2008

Oh Donall, I soo know this to be true. Such a beautiful tender poem. HG: -) xx

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Dónall Dempsey

Dónall Dempsey

Curragh Camp, Co. Kildare, Eire.
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