Love Tree (A Comment On Perdita Young's Poem If Love Be A Plant) Poem by Akhtar Jawad
Love Tree (A Comment On Perdita Young's Poem If Love Be A Plant)
I think love is a dense tree,
it has roots and trunk,
it has branches and leaves,
it has flowers and fruits.
Life beneath a love tree is safe
from the burning sun,
below a moon and bright stars
when pleasant winds make it dancing,
love tree starts singing,
listen to the music of this tree,
at least once in a full moon lit night
sleep under a love tree,
and dream what you never dream
No need of describing the details of the dream,
I know I am a regular dreamer.
I dream and dream every night
someone comes on the earth
from the skies.
A fairy or a star I don't know
but it whispers in my ears,
"Your life has been increased for another lovely day."
An excellent piece of work! Liked the first seven lines most! Thanks dear sir for sharing! ...............10
Mixing nature and love at its best. An encompassing love is drawn from this marvelous write. The last six lines are very moving. Beautifully crafted piece.10
...and whispers in my ear...your life has been increased for another lovely day. What a lovely way to look at the gift of a new day. The love tree I will sleep under next full moon. Thank you for sharing this.
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5/22/2024 12:57:42 AM # 1.0.0.1119
Thank you so much, Akhtar, for the excellent poem as a comment. I wish to have found and read it earlier than today... Too much occupied on Mondays and Tuesdays and Thursdays and Fridays. Greetings from afar. Perdita