Love Stoned Poem by Brooke Audino

Love Stoned

Rating: 2.9


When you see me
in the hall,
by the tree,
where birds make their call,
do you feel the way I do,
Because I`m stilll not over you?

I wish you could see,
how much we belong.
Was it me,
That made us not get along?

So tell me why
when i see you
you make my heart fly.
I`d like to know something else too.
If you feel the same way too?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Emu Getachew 25 September 2009

Simply exquisite …the words were true and raw fervor -10.

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Ro'ya Abdulaal 10 September 2009

A sad, heartbreaking situation, after breakup what can you do but weep? Well expressed, the absolute simplicity is awesome in your poem.

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