Sergio Jaime

Rookie - 181 Points (23/05/1987)

Love Starts


As in the darkness I just hear steps,
voices that guide my way,
And then I feel, the rain in my face,
the wind across my body,
and I start looking for you.
As a kid I fall and cry, unable to find you.
but as a man I rise, nervous and brave,
and then I find you, the end.
Tears in my face, I'm not crying,
And then I realize,
You felt the same.
Souls bound each other, comprehend.
Love starts, our first step.

Submitted: Monday, July 23, 2012
Edited: Tuesday, July 24, 2012

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  • Gold Star - 19,247 Points Chinedu Dike (11/10/2014 1:01:00 PM)

    A nice romantic poem written with conviction. I like the articulation of the piece. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON. (Report) Reply

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