Love Lost In Life Threatening Fog Poem by Terence George Craddock

Love Lost In Life Threatening Fog



lost in stray mist fog romance
no direction fog mist endless
lost unsure where here is
lost unsure where home is
lost unsure about where to go is
time is ageless frozen timeless
hung in time mist fog emotions
where is love when fog burns

off evaporates as if it never was
caught in sudden bright sun glare
caught on concrete alone footpaths
caught among stumps of dead trees
which was once vibrant love forests
bewildering devastating fog romance

fog bites with too many teeth
out of nowhere sudden reality biting
too little adoration left time is biting
romance burned is bites in butt
mad dog spring attacks bites legs vicious
dogs animals seeking kill go for throat
choke hold kill suffocating jaws throat
asphyxiated strangulated smothered death

Tuesday, November 3, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: fog,lost,lost love,love,pain,romance,emotions
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Copyright © Terence George Craddock
Written in November 2020 on the 4.11.2020.
Inspired by the poem 'Flirt Gone Bad - Άτυχο Φλερτάρισμα' by the poet Kostas Lagos.
Dedicated to the poet Kostas Lagos.
See also the companion poem 'Lost In A Mist Fog Bitten Romance' by the poet Terence George Craddock.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Terry Craddock 03 November 2020

Ah this is not a normal dog, it is a 'mad dog' coming out of the fog, a totally different creature. The luckless lover is also in a place he is not supposed to be, lost in fog. Wild animals are more tame, curious, less afraid in mist, in the wild, for some strange reason heavy mist water vapour changes behaviour.

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Terry Craddock 15 November 2020

A Mad Dog Coming Out Of The Fog in the mist lost in mounting panic lost in mind fog imagination panic... it is possible to turn a normal dog into a mad dog coming out of fear fog... strangely wild animals are more tame curious less afraid in mist in the wild... animal sight is keen nose smell scent lame useless in wet sodden mist animal turns mild... Inspired by the poem 'Love Lost In Life Threatening Fog' by the poet Terence George Craddock.

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Varsha M 03 November 2020

today dog will be very sad hearing all his romantic plot. With so many bites and teeths.

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Denis Mair 04 November 2020

Indeed, love is a guiding light, a reordering of priorities, an unending chain of anticipations to steer by... until it ends. Then comes an ordeal of numbness and being cut off. Fog occupies the medium in which we move and breathe, so it seems to steal up from within, and its disorientation lingers within. Five stars for writing love's strength in pain.

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Terry Craddock 15 November 2020

I wrote the poem 'A Luckless Lover Legendary Lost On Moor Backstory', inspired by the poem 'Love Lost In Life Threatening Fog', by the poet Terence George Craddock.

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Terry Craddock 15 November 2020

I wrote the split images 'Lost On Wild Remote Moor Panic Disorientated' and 'In Mist Fog Ancient Timeless Lost Without Trace', inspired by the poem 'Love Lost In Life Threatening Fog', by the poet Terence George Craddock.

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Terry Craddock 15 November 2020

Timeless Hiking On Trap Boggy Moorland weather had sudden closed in as mist hill country does closed in reducing visibility making conditions unpleasant arms legs now mud covered often now fatigue stumbled a few patches of boggy ground slipping struggling to keep balance with rain mist mist constant falling turns once easily followed paths into squelchy churned up mud baths waiting waiting to trip unsteady foot

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Terry Craddock 15 November 2020

A Legend Of Lovers Lost the luckless lover can never meet his beloved lost in mists of fog lost in mazes of fog impossible to see through fog impossible to get out of fog the luckless lover is lost in a place he is not supposed to be a legend of lovers lost Inspired by the poem 'Love Lost In Life Threatening Fog' by the poet Terence George Craddock.

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Terry Craddock 15 November 2020

I wrote the split image 'A Concord Protocol All May Safety Pass In Fog Mist', and the poem 'An Ancient Agreed Upon Dust Code Accord', inspired by the poem 'Love Lost In Life Threatening Fog', by the poet Terence George Craddock.

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