Love Poem by Deepa Thomas

Love

Rating: 4.8


Let a thousand miles come between us
I can still feel your love
Warmth of your breath
Safeness of your arms

Scaling the highest reaches
From deepest depths
Engulfing and melting me in it
Like never before

Rivers will bring me
The tranquil in your eyes
Stars will shower on me
The sparkle of your smile

Rain will drench me
With the tears we cried
Wind will carry
Your scent back to me

And I.
Will be waiting for you always
To receive and return
A thousand fold of what you gave

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mary Nagy 17 May 2005

Beautiful poem Deepa. Very nice. Sincerely, Mary

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Beautiful Love Poem..each word is embeded like a pearl in the necklace....

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Jc Lunaria 22 June 2010

heart felt... what could be more gallant than to share love with some one you truly love.... great job!

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Diya A 10 April 2008

Its a very nice poem... It touches you and you feel like believing in love...

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Yadi S 13 April 2006

You keep surprising me.... Essence of love is so well captured....

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Deepa, you have expounded the sensitive meaning of love very well indeed. And your use of poetry to express the essence of the message touched me deeply. All the best for future endeavours in the field of poetry and beyond!

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