Love Poem by Kayleigh Tongue

Love



i need you
i miss you
i want you
i love you
i wanna hold you
i wanna kiss you
you was my world
and i really miss you

And i do miss you
i just thoungh we were meant to be
i guess now we'll never know
the only thing i want was to see you happy
whether its with me or without me
i just want you to be happy :)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Christina Smith 19 April 2009

good but ' you was my world ' isn't proper english.......I dunno if your foreign or something, that's all I've got to say. Good, well done I felt your love xx

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