Lost... Poem by Alice Cuenca

Lost...

Rating: 5.0


Your unnameable-love
shattered...
fragments I sifted through
reason...
I know nothing
I have looked everywhere
still lost in the maze
Was I there?
I am the rhizome that sips water
from this vanishing stream
slipping away...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 15 May 2008

lost in the stream of love, hoping to be stranded at the river bank......nice write candice. u hv the touch! keep going oal.

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PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE 16 May 2008

interesting love poem, thanks for sharing

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Analou Pabalate 24 May 2008

it's nice to lost sometimes..................but in love...hmmmmmmmm....we all are the seekers of true love.........great..........

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Armando Guzman 25 May 2008

time just makes yesterday fade into a blurry vision so we can not recall the truth in our hearts. nice poem

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 25 May 2008

lost in the wild stream.........and never returns.

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Emily Oldham 09 May 2009

wow, amazing flow of consciousness. I love it Athena *** words will change the world ***

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Ying Escalona 17 July 2008

wow...the other day..i sifted flour..i made bread...my friend Ric..he sifted suspects..and.he freed some

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Saint Cynosure 04 June 2008

I have given this one a 10 it is superb.

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Catherine Rica Cosico 27 May 2008

lovely piece...There are questions left no answer...in due time you will know.

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Ency Bearis 25 May 2008

probably just fade away.... interesting.... Ency Bearis

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