Longing Poem by Richard R. Navarro

Longing

Rating: 2.6


potapotapota...

the tap leaks.
so does my heart,
upon reading
your poem,
of a speck of memory
too insignificant to remember
yet too precious to forget.

a million what if's,
as i look
into the horizon,
an empty stare
sewing fluffy dreams
on a tapestry of pain.

potapotapota...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
L. K. Thayer 13 April 2008

very strong, very nice...thank you

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 09 April 2008

i'm longing for more....of your works...........

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Jurietta Duraan 09 April 2008

Beautiful comparisson.... creates sadness.... I love it

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