Long Road Poem by Bernard F. Asuncion

Long Road

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D-on't be afraid of the long road,
A-s you will encounter thirst;
N-ever fear the hunger,
I-n the morn of March first.
C-hoose to walk on the long road, for life is indeed difficult;
A-void making the shortcut coupled with forlorn fault.

A-im to endure your journey,
D-o carry your solemn load;
U-se your faith, hope, and love,
L-earn to tread on the long road.

Long Road
Monday, March 5, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: birthday
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Narayana Aghalaya 05 March 2018

Beautiful poem - I think it is a birthday greeting. The first letter of all lines-together I suppose is the name of your daughter. God bless her! I agree with you - we are here for the long haul. Shortcuts, strictly avoid. Thank You Mr.Asuncion, for sharing!

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Aniruddha Pathak 01 September 2018

Use your faith, hope, and love, Learn to tread on the long road. Very well-writ poem indeed. full marks and more 10+ I remember having written a poem on this subject. But can't remember the caption. Aniruddha Pathak

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 05 March 2018

A beautifully crafted and well executed acrostic write. A great poem that conveys hope, faith and love. Very inspiring.10

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Seamus O Brian 05 March 2018

Bernard, you are a fountain of beautifully expressed, thoughtful tributes. Your continual offerings of encouragement and kindness are surely a blessing to many. And will bring blessings upon yourself, certainly. Well done, my friend.

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Edward Kofi Louis 05 March 2018

To endure! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 05 March 2018

A beautiful message sent to a beautiful person on her birthday. Such a positive poem of faith, hope and love. Thank you Bernard........10

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Bernard F. Asuncion

Bernard F. Asuncion

Subic, Philippines
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