Loneliness Poem by Jay hmph

As the candles are blown out
The desire I yearn for is mortality
The skies covered in flames
Poisoned roses lie in the downpour
My bloodshot eyes gazing into the darkness

Loneliness washes over me
As the butterflies flitter away
Serenity leaving me
Letting the coldness take over

Tears spring from my eyes
As I make out the shadow
Walking away...
Forever

NOTE: I am willing to take any suggestions to make this piece better.