Like Mine Poem by Seamus O' Brian

Like Mine



I saw my hands
the other day
on another man.
Gripping his elbows
unconsciously self-protecting.

Like my hands do.

Fingers like mine
slender, not fine
but freckled,
like mine.

Hands that tilled the earth,
milked the cows,
patted my head-

perhaps.

Hands that baited the hooks
gutted the fish, handled the crabs
with no fear of pinchers,

whatsoever.

Opened unopenable jars
unwrenchable nuts
unworkable whatsits.

Hands that held
my mother’s face
before love became a memory.

Before my head was unpatted
my shoulders unsqueezed.
My life unguarded.

Before the days of
unconscious self-protection.

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Upon seeing my father after 35 years.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Laurie Van Der Hart 24 December 2016

I really like this poem, Seamus. Such a clever perspective, and observant thoughts. Few words expressing so much. You didn't see your dad for 35 years? ? Wow.

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Seamus O Brian 26 December 2016

Thank you, Laurie. Yes, it was a somewhat tragic series of miscommunications and poorly informed good intentions. Your feedback is always highly valued and appreciated. :) S

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