Like A Dream Pt 2 Poem by Corey Fauchon

Like A Dream Pt 2

Rating: 4.8


Waking up from those dreams
Realise nothing is what it seems
Everything I knew was wrong
Everything about me was false

What they said behind my back
Never knowing things I lack
Like my ability to be normal
What you see is just the surface

Underneath, Feeling like a storm
Feeling like I’m a different form
Trying to act as normal as possible
Feeling the rage creeping up

Soon the approaching storm will overcome
My feelings and emotions will be numb
The streets will be completely empty
No mercy and no patience will show

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mohammad Akmal Nazir 06 May 2011

Nice poem. Very well conceived. Rich in imagery and style. Fine poetics. I rate it 10. Thanks for sharing..... Please read and rate my poem 'A humble complaint' on page 2. Please use the search box by typing the name of the poem if the page doesn't open with the title of the poem.

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Corey Fauchon

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Newcastle, NSW, Australia
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