Life's Pattern ~ Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Life's Pattern ~

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Flowers bloom and then petals crumble!
Fire ignites and turns everything to ashes!
People laugh to end up crying!
Tree bears the burden of fruit and others enjoy
There's lightning and a thunderstorm before the rain!
Life follows a pattern and it moves on.....

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tihama Hykam 07 April 2022

Very true, this how the life moves on.

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 07 April 2022

I agree there's no change Bravo!

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Sandra Feldman 08 April 2022

Your resume of life's pattern is 6 wonderful lines is as exact as it is poetically correct adoutstasng, This is a remarkable work that will enrich the lives of all who have the good fortune of reading it, Thjank you my poet- friend for writing it, It is simply superb,

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 09 April 2022

This is life's philosophy. Joy and tears always move hand in hand. Beautifully presented dear Asim ji.

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Evelyn Judy Buehler 09 April 2022

Beautifully described. Thanks for sharing.

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Gordon Walter 08 April 2022

Worth knowing it. Intelligent poetry.

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Shreya Hacks 08 April 2022

Life follows a pattern and it moves on..... True.

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Richard Wlodarski 08 April 2022

Outstanding work of art about the cycle of life as illustrated in The Book of Ecclesiastes. And so brilliantly sung as TURN TURN TURN by The Byrds.

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