Life Is Hard.... Poem by Anubhav Sharma

Life Is Hard....

Rating: 5.0


You know yourself; your time is hard,
But O'Dear, Don't lose your heart.
Days may be dark, Nights could be worse,
But O'Dear, Don't lose your nerves.
Smiles could be less, Efforts may look worthless,
But O'Dear, Don't get Depressed.
Friends may look far, like millions of stars,
But O'Dear, Don't shatter apart.
God may seem hard, like an unreal story,
But O'Dear, Don't forget his glory………
'cause the day would come when you will feel
It's your Day, let's yell and scream.
The day would be bright and the nights a lot brighter,
Success would be yours; you will win like a fighter.
O'my Dear, just keep in mind,
A part could be hard, not the whole life.
So look for the smile in the hardest of times
There is lot to come, just open your eyes.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Antony Theodore 26 June 2017

You know yourself; Days may be dark, Nights could be worse, Don't get Depressed. Success would be yours; you will win like a fighter. i collected all these points from your poem. yes against all odds we have to hope against all hopelessness. we are going to win. this is a poem of positive determination. love this poem. tony

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Cherry Sha 11 November 2008

its such an inspiring poem.. I loved it... its giving me hope... and making me believe this too shall pass.. Nice simple words and good presentation. thanks for sharing...

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Priya Arora 11 November 2008

Marvellous peace of work Anubhav, Your uplifting words to take your friend out from the darkness are so amazing that anyone can feel the depthness of thoughts that you tried to put in your poem. A10 for this lovely peace, I feel honoured if you can spare some time and give give your valuable comments and Ratings on my poems. Thanks for Sharing. Regards, Priyaa Arora

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C T Heart 11 November 2008

Life is hard thats for sure but with this kind of advice things will always befine...uplifting words. Beautiful composition indeed a 10.

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