Let Us Resolve To Revolve Poem by malini kadir

malini kadir

malini kadir

Nagapatinam, a coastal port, Tamilnadu, India NOW RESIDING IN TRICHY

Let Us Resolve To Revolve

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Let us resolve to revolve





Let us resolve to revolve

Our own magic in our vicinity

With a little change

In our views range!



When your praise

Carries your BUT you could haves;

In the tail end of sentences

Making praise worthless sixpences



Why not encourage,

And smiling add an “AND”

In place of “BUT”

Just listing the good

Making nought of the negatives in your brood!



For it is the criticism

In jest or otherwise

That “BUTS” into your life’s happiness

Can YOU not A” tongue harness?

Just two little words interchange?



“But” is the only word

That injects self doubts

SO use this needle in emergency

When the victim is in dire need!



Nevertheless, spirits nosedive

Less use is a bless in utter mess

A calm plus can activities positive inspire

It can in its absence steadily rectify…watch out!

No butt about “BUT”!



~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~malinikadir

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jen Shearer 14 December 2008

I like this poem alot! Your message is very clear!

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