Let The Love Fall Poem by Aiden Florence

Let The Love Fall

Rating: 5.0


Words are worth choking for
Just to let the secret out of the throat
Feels like thousand knives stabbing through the heart
Let the blood fill up
The wounds that would otherwise never heal

Where there’s love there’s hate
Where there’s hope there’s despair

You’ve been venturing this on a hopeless hazard
Ever since we first met
You have to accept the fate
There’s no love inside
How can you keep it alive

Where there’s fire there’s water
Where there’s life there’s death

Soberness will devour us
Let the memories go
Drink it away so we can lock ourselves
Dead in peace to keep this love real
Till history gets a taste of what our love was like

Dimensions drench itself in cold blood
Tears break apart
Love falls apart
Until there’s nothing left here to live for

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Dimensions drench itself in cold blood Tears break apart Love falls apart Until there’s nothing left here to live for ^^my favorite, in this you've captured the sense of pain, and i love it very good.. x3, mill

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Janelle Morehart 15 November 2007

Wow how tragic yet so beautiful. Sorta like watching a car crash, its a horrible thing but you can't look away. Not that Im saying your poem is a car crash haha, it just catches your attention like one. I love it! Such great work as usual, Keep it up!

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Casey Gauthier 08 November 2007

hey that's a good one. I really like the first lines. :)

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