Leaving Me Poem by Natasha Knowles

Leaving Me



You left me
And never said good-bye
Now tell me why?
You said you’d never leave
So I took that into me
I wish you were back
To see me slack
I held into thee
Never knowing I wouldn’t see
You looking back at me
Standing here tall; and so strong
So this is me saying good-bye
For good; and I don’t know why
And I hate it to
Love You!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

everything was good except the end but i am gunna give you a chance just because i know u have better.. hey wats up im Kirsty i am the head manager of poem hunter i read a few of your poems and loved them but it is not really me that needs to read them it is the head master.. you know the creater of poem hunter! i recommend your name to her so you should write her. her screen name is 'kelli gibbs' GOOD LUCK sincerly, Kirsty Acosta a.k.a. (manager)

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