Lazy Lion Poem by Tsira Gogeshvili

Lazy Lion

Rating: 5.0


Lazy lions are uneasy from flies...
Wooden acrobats - broken by feet...
The butterfly at night - with singed by wings...
- You, my dear, choose the most sweet? !

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Antonio Liao 23 September 2008

your one of the great poet i meet.... i like your style....very sweeping in nature...so beautiful indeed...like a fresh in the basket of mystic avenue... a very revealing sphere of human experience... thank you... a 10/10

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Kesav Easwaran 20 September 2008

a finely crafted piece...good juggling of implied words 10

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Allan Macli Borges 19 September 2008

Tsira, you are great! ! all of us love the words but the right words loves you.

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Ashraful Musaddeq 14 September 2008

A choice is difference, the presentation of the poem is interesting.10..

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Kris Smith 14 September 2008

Beautiful Tsira you have eloquence with your pen and heart 10 chris

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