Layla And Majnun By Daniel Brick Poem by Daniel Brick

Layla And Majnun By Daniel Brick

Rating: 5.0


Dedicated to my Persian Princess,
Baharak Barzin

I have been following traces of Layla and Majnun.
It is a labor of love, like their wanderings
to find an asylum. Hardships began with winds and
rain erasing their footprints everywhere they went.
Some have concluded their story is only words
on paper, which can also be erased. What do you think,
my friend? I know they live in your heart, whether real
or imagined. They prosper there, because your heart,
young, vibrant, full of an excess of love, holds the secret.

I often stop in some green place,
sit in shade or warmth, depending
on the season, and watch the things
they watched. At this moment, I see
flowers bending in the direction
they took. The lovers and the flowers
both follow the sun. As it begins to set,
Layla and Majun blend into the darkness.
The flowers toss their aromas into the night-
scape. Layla breathes deeply the scented air,
and Majun swells with pride as he senses
her presence in the purple scent. Are they
really together in this tender night?
I do not know: the darkness heroically
protects them, the night has absorbed them.

Where is Majun in the wide expanse
of the morning? He has found a forest
clearing. He has braced himself against
tree bark, and waits for her arrival.
This is how Majun lives each day and
every night. He is perpetually hopeful.
He cannot accept any help. Any help
would diminish his passion, and he lives
only for his passion and Layla. I see
his emaciated body, I see the longing
in his eyes, and I pray for him. He is
suffering in his inner and outer selves.

In the bright light of mid morning,
I see Layla standing on the cliff's edge.
She looks into a sky filled with tumbling
clouds. When I look again, she is sitting
on a cloud throne, and her subjects cluster
below her. They love her, her beauty and poise
remind them of a rising sun. But Layla sees
only Majun on a stage of her imagination.
He sings to her, he dances for her, he recites
poems he wrote to her. I am convinced
they are together during his performance.
Then, the bitter truth assails me:
it is a mirage, I was deceived by hope.

The next morning I awake in the summer palace
of my friend, a minor nobleman. When I speak
of my sightings of Layla and Majnun, the courtiers
laugh: they assume I am joking. Then they leave
my presence to pursue the games of courtiers.
Oh, love, where have you fled? Is there not
room in this mortal world for an immortal romance?
Is there a secret truth about Layla and Majun?
I will be the guardian of their passion.

Wednesday, July 15, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: hope,love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Soran M. H 15 July 2020

flowers bending in the direction they took. The lovers and the flowers both follow the sun. As it begins to set, Layla and Majun blend into the darkness. …………

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Soran M. H 15 July 2020

I am convinced they are together during his performance. Then, the bitter truth assails me: it is a mirage, I was deceived by hope.

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Soran M. H 15 July 2020

part 2// , but Daniel here teaches us the true meaning of love and real hope, so that we can see these two lovers reborn in his poem and their hope is come true here, well done and it goes on to my fav list 10/10

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Glen Kappy 16 July 2020

ah, daniel, this poem inspired some pleasant thoughts and meanderings. thank you. more in a separate email. blessings, brother! -glen

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Soran M. H 15 July 2020

so powerful and heart touching: Oh, love, where have you fled? Is there not room in this mortal world for an immortal romance?

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Soran M. H 15 July 2020

Dear poet Daniel, well done we are waiting for more, keep writing and stay blessed.. every success

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Soran M. H 15 July 2020

This beautiful and powerful poem shows us the strength and ability of our professional poet; poetic wise, language, idea, imagery, meaning, symbols, and the success choice of the theme..That is how the good poet writes, Excellent and thanks for sharing your amazing works with us.

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Soran M. H 15 July 2020

part1// Daniel Brick, as a veteran poet, with a wide knowledge of other cultures, folklore and epics.. sheds light in this poem on the true meaning of love in the time of no- love, even when the Layla and Majnun story ends tragically without meeting each others, and the two lovers died one after another from pain and torment,

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