I woke up this morning
Feeling right
No sorrow, no pain, no stress
Everything so bright
Untill a voice spoke to me
"You died last night"!
Στο σημερινό πρωινό δε βρήκα
κανένα ψεγάδι
Ούτε πόνος, ούτε θλίψη, ούτε άγχος
ουτ' ίχνος σκοτάδι
Μέχρι που μια φωνή μου μίλησε
"Πέθανες χθες βράδυ"
I didn't expect that last line! True and hilarious. A nice piece.5 *
A well conveyed poem... Truly magnificent....5 stars.... Bernard
No sorrow, no pain, no stress Death is beautiful. Good poetic art
Oh my God. No one knows will life be good or bad after death. So live life full as you breath
A fascinating poem. Very thought provoking. A new lease of life devoid of pains and sorrows. What. a wonderful life! Five Stars! ! ! ! !
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
A profound message in your poem Kostas. It reminded me of a poem I wrote and posted on Poem Hunter some time ago titled - " To Wake Up Dead? ! " - Well done.