Last Night Poem by Tandin Wangchuk

Last Night

Rating: 4.8


When the world was asleep
I was beside thee
So serene and happy
Thinking how to start this banter
But i saw the words in your eyes
and i start to write within
Fillers used frequently
But it was sweet like never heard before.
Your aroma took me high
I saw the stars in your eyes
When the rest of the heaven was blue
This isn't any mediocre
But an angel in disguise
beside me, above me and within me.

Monday, May 4, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: nights
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chinedu Dike 08 February 2017

Beautiful rendition of words to utmost justice. An insightful train of thought elegantly brought forth from the the heart wit conviction. Thanks for sharing Tandin and do remain blessed.

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Liza Sudina 09 October 2015

beautifu love poem - lifts me to the sky!

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Phurpa Wangdi 01 September 2015

nice piece of writing...great

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Tashi Penjor 09 May 2015

wondrously beauty.... nice peace

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