Last Call (Salvation Libations) Poem by Chuck Audette

Last Call (Salvation Libations)

Rating: 4.0


sin fast!
it's late
and the holy water
is past
its expiation date

but
for thirstier transgressors
and confessors, more chronic
a tastier dilution -
the absolution vodka tonic!

Your shelf life is eternal
so buy the best one that we sell
with applications all internal
no one's ever gone to hell!



(expiation: the act of purifying of sin; atonement)
(absolution: formal remission of sin, as in the sacrament of penance)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
James (aka Eustace) Bradley 31 January 2006

A brilliant poem, I really like this. You capture drunkenness well.

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Rich Hanson 11 April 2006

I enjoy your sence of humor. A refreshing change from all the ponderously serious poetry posted on the site

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Esther Leclerc 29 March 2006

Clever! Clever! ! Clever! ! ! Every line is a marvel. U R Somethin' Else, Chuck! Don't know what, but glad you are! Est : ]

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Gina Onyemaechi 14 February 2006

Ha ha ha! ! Clever language as well as humorous effects, mind. Smiling to herself, Gina.

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Lea Simpson 01 February 2006

Chin chin Chuck...and in case the Catholic church is right, I'd like to offer a toast: Best of luck to you in the afterlife. I enjoyed this thoroughly!

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Solomon Brook 31 January 2006

Love it, very smooth flow and creatively structured.

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Chuck Audette

Chuck Audette

Poetry Hell, Vermont
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