Know What? Poem by jane solanrobertson

Know What?

Rating: 5.0


Know what?
You've changed.
Used to be a laugh
Now it's
Moan moan moan
And
Can't
Be
Bothered.
Everything's just
Too
Much
Trouble.
You used to be a looker.
Maybe, if you
Lose some weight
Do your hair
Buy some clothes
I might
Just
Like you
Again....
Truth hurts,
Doesn't it?
But it
Just
Had to be said.
Well.
Do something about it, then!

Right,
That bloody mirror
Can go for a start....

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
David Moore 25 February 2008

really good jane, made me laugh as well! x

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David Taylor 17 February 2008

Mirror, mirror on the wall speak the truth and I'll put you in the bin! You could try a tinted mirror? And good poem enjoyed it! David

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