Keep Away From Devil Dot Poem by Kumarmani Mahakul

Keep Away From Devil Dot

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Around us we do find devil dot.
Lie, violence, prick and pocket cut.

We too see manhandle, brawl and cruelty,
Person with anger and loss of humanity.

There are too gentlemen and ladies around us,
Person of truthfulness and helpfulness boss.

Here are people of strong personality and doughty,
There are some people who are very naughty.

Keep away from devil dot and live peacefully,
Otherwise you may face troubles and fetch unruly.

A devil dot is like a black dot in white paper,
Leave it and pray God to lead life of dapper.

Friday, October 7, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: danger,life,thought
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
This poem is written on 24 November 2014.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Aniruddha Pathak 18 July 2019

'A devil dot is like a black dot in white paper, ... Leave it alone, and focus on the dot-less area neat and clean. The world is dotted with all sorts of people, one can't help it, yet you have a choice to choose. This poem poses with this choice. Beautiful.

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Pushpendra Patel 27 February 2019

Remaining away from Devil is safer. Leaf carries letter. Calmness is inside own mind. This we should feel. Soul is pure. Nature impacts on soul. This is a great poem and you are a nice poet.

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Edward Kofi Louis 17 October 2016

Keep away from the Devil! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Edward Kofi Louis 13 October 2016

Keep away from evil works. Nice advice. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 07 October 2016

Good advice to Leave it and Pray... That is our only way to overcome any adversary we might stumble upon while looking at the ground. Good one for sure! 13 Dec 2014 by Sticks In Mind | Reply Note: This feedback is recived via poetfreak (PF)

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Kumarmani Mahakul

Kumarmani Mahakul

Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA
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