Just Sharing Frustration Poem by me poet yeps poet

Just Sharing Frustration

Rating: 5.0


Frustration! ! !
They say
Very High BP
and
say
no liquor
no sodium
no smoking
just drink plain glasses of water
and
walk
eat plenty of fruits
reduce your weight
the girth for men
must be lesser than x inches
and
for women y inches

else order a wheel chair
reserve a berth in a hospital
better take precautions
than wait for a solution
well end up now

it's no time for frustration
Old age alone is welcome
that is all human's resolution
the docs performed his
ordained occupation...

send notes to friends
kith and kin
to meet finally
and
pray for salvation
of all past present
and
also future
other's sin

Amen

Sunday, August 26, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: life,life and death,lifespan,poet,poetic expression,poetry
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Those who don't eat well die
those who eat well also die
then whydoes a doc make you cry
we all must some day
one day
if not today
having come all this way
die
life is too short
why shorten it further
by just thinking

a guy asked the doc
will I live for ever
without salt and sugar
he said no
but you will die normal
and be happier
no pain nor injections
and
know you did your best
to Live


AMEN DOC

WILL SEND YOUR BILL
IF YOU WILL

Till there is time for cremation still
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 28 August 2018

Too much of eating is bad for health. No eating is too. Balanced diet is best for health as per the advice of doctor. In order to lead a peaceful life we have to maintain our health. A beautiful poem so nicely executed. Thanks for sharing.10

1 0 Reply
Me Poet Yeps Poet 28 August 2018

as usual lovely encouraging comments come from you thanks and 10 points also

0 0
Jayatissa K.Liyanage 27 August 2018

Arogyaa paramaa laabaa in Pali. Health is the most precious wealth in life Lord Buddha said. He demonstrated to the world, for anything in life, best paath is the middle path. Indulging too much or too little in anything always calls for trouble. An excellent poem of very exemplary thoughts Thanks for sharing.

1 0 Reply
Me Poet Yeps Poet 27 August 2018

so kind of you for ur maiden visit do read my moms smiles and mothersday today you may like theses best ones thans

0 0
Rini shibu 27 August 2018

Health is wealth...stay healthy

1 0 Reply
Me Poet Yeps Poet 27 August 2018

wish u the same RIni

0 0
READ THIS POEM IN OTHER LANGUAGES
Close
Error Success