Little girl with your long brown hair
Sleek jeans with a look
Like they've been spray painted on.
Where are you going with that image you show?
Do you think that's the, ' In look? '
So called, 'In look', you know?
You've just barely turned sixteen
But you look twenty one.
Out on night streets alone
Looking for what you say is, 'Just some fun! '
But what might be awaiting you
Is some unwanted advance.
With that image you're portraying
You're really taking a big chance.
Chance of innocence loss, with that grown up look
Of all the immages you're seeing
In movies and books.
Take care my dear
For I'm watching you.
I'm that evil which now stalks
Just that sort of Image you do!
good advice and warning to teenagers pretending of legal age..let say there are so many vultures there lurking around with the looks..great write...10
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Speaking as a teenager, I totally understand what this piece is saying and it's so true. I love the way you crafted it and then ending.