Jeena Bhi Kya Poem by Mandeep Chahal

Jeena Bhi Kya

Rating: 4.5

Jeena bhi kya tujhe yun chup chup ke dekhkar..
Sochte hai mar jaye kuch din na tujhe dekhkar...
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Bas ek aarzoo h Teri kimat a mulaqat janne Ki..
Hume to ek sajda tak na mila sari saltanat bechkar..
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Tanj mat kariyega Jo unko koi saza na Hui...
Krke qatal Wo aksar ho aate hai dargah a ajmer prr..
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Dard hoga khoon hoga lekin fir bada sukoon hoga.
Sochte hai nikal le ek din is kambhakt dil ko khurechkar..
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Main kehrha Hu na k Wo insan bahot acha hai..
Mat zachna uski bedardi hamare sher pr.
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Saturday, October 17, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Abduhoo Salamath 21 August 2016

bahuth khoob.....excellent...

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M Asim Nehal 18 October 2015

Wah wah....Kya baat hai....Mandeepji.Maza aagaya padhkar. Main kehrha Hu na k Wo insan bahot acha hai.. Mat zachna uski bedardi hamare sher pr.

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Rajnish Manga 18 October 2015

Thanks for sharing this outstanding Ghazal with us. There is ease, intensity and freshness in your expression, Mandeep. I quote this fine couplet: Dard hoga khoon hoga lekin fir bada sukoon hoga. Sochte hai nikal le ek din is kambhakt dil ko khurechkar..

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