It's You Poem by jose sarang

It's You

Rating: 5.0


The smiles,
The streams,
The hills,
The heights,
The winds,
The wings,
The years,
The tears,
The pains,
The gains,
The songs,
The waves,
The night,
The lights,
And the word lights my nights,
And then the silence wraps me in whites,
It is you...

It's You
Wednesday, June 8, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: love and life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kelly Kurt 16 June 2016

Nicely written piece, Jose. Thanks

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Pamela Sinicrope 08 June 2016

A very passionate poem. All of the 'The's' are 'You.' I like the line about silences wrapping you in whites. It evokes images of surrender to 'you, ' of bedsheets, of innocence. Unique writing style.

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Ratnakar Mandlik 08 June 2016

Excellent song of life with a message to take life in it's stride. Thanks for sharing.10 points.

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