It Is Killing... Poem by Luwi Habte

It Is Killing...

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Something which has been occurred in my head
What I think about, every night in my bed
Either happiness or sadness created
Which let my life glide
And he is not beside
I cant take care of my guide
This is what my mind regard

How can I handle the situation
Which kills inside and creates pain
Each and every word from his mouth
Has dropp of love and faith
The more he talk the more I fall
Have no idea if it is his goal
But am dieing by this unexpected love
It is taking all the energy I have

Who can help? who can tell him?
Who can let him know that he is fame?
Who can remind him that am all alone
Who can remove the gap among
Tell him that he is my savior
Let he know that he is my innocent behavior
Tell him that i love him most
Tell him that he took all the heart i got!

just a poem,

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 27 November 2009

Well the person concerned in his ‘in-built’ antenna can get your signal next the coveted help will come…nice poem Ten+ Ms. Nivedita UK Cordially invite you read my poems with comments and….please watch out new posts niv

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Emma Adamyan 24 November 2009

very deep and beautiful Luwi, but what a tittle though, i think it should have been sth as exiting as the poem,10

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Eyan Desir 23 November 2009

Well romantic Luwi...Good write

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John Knight 19 November 2009

Hi Angel - This is straight form the heart even though verse one is about the head! You are in a dillema so so in love and yet there seems to be a barrier? 'happiness or sadness - not beside (me) - I can't take care'. Verse Two 'How can I handle this situation? ' 'The more he talk the more I fall' 'He's taking my energy - AM DYING BY THIS UNEXPECTED LOVE' This sounds serious Luwi 'Who can help - Who can tell him? '. Only you can do that Angel - There is a gap - but LOVE can bridge it - you have given him all your heart - if he knows - that should be sufficient. We will pray for you and support you Luwi - we all love you and we don't want you to be hurt. Let us know what is happening - you are too young and too beautiful for all this angst! This is a very personal and powerful poem - thanks for sharing it merits a TEN. Love you in Poetry - PAPA JOHN.

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