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...In The Valley Of My Mind

I carry black roses
Of what that has been
Rain drops wet my floor
To many cold night
Days of unfairness
I smell her fragrant
I awake to find this
In the valley of my mind

I hear the wedding bells
I see a wedding ring
Her kisses wet my lips
I see her smiling face
I hold her to find it's
In the valley of my mind

The rain drops has dried
I'm happy I can smile
Because I realize
I can get her back
Any time I want to
In the valley of my mind


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plublish work of Eyan Desir

Submitted: Saturday, May 02, 2009
Edited: Friday, May 08, 2009

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  • Sangnam Nam (6/9/2009 10:48:00 AM)

    Have all your dreams of love
    fulfilled
    in your dreams

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  • Howard Kern (5/17/2009 11:43:00 AM)

    very ethereal keep on plugin!

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  • Obinna Eruchie (5/16/2009 8:44:00 AM)

    pain and pleasure in the mind of love lost. the poem has a good imagery.

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  • Cindy Kreiner Sera (5/12/2009 12:31:00 PM)

    In the valley of my mind - beautiful Eyan...where precious moments, even after the pain, can be stored....

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  • Sangnam Nam (5/10/2009 1:32:00 AM)

    Black roses
    beautiful imagery.....
    your floor black and the rain drops
    drip to splash the white wter drops
    to and fro

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  • Linda Ori (5/8/2009 5:55:00 PM)

    The mind is a powerful thing. If not for hopes and dreams, we would never attempt anything. You make the choices that define your life - 'in the valley of your mind'. Nice write, Eyan
    Linda :)

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  • JOSEPH POEWHIT (5/8/2009 12:08:00 PM)

    The mind really has unlimited potentials

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  • Lynda Robson (5/8/2009 6:44:00 AM)

    Nice write Eyan, the valley of the mind is capable of anything,
    10
    Lynda xx

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  • Patricia Dashwood (5/8/2009 2:37:00 AM)

    romantic..more verses please

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  • Rajaram Ramachandran (5/7/2009 7:10:00 PM)

    A loveable desire in the valley of the poet's mind.

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