Treasure Island

Eyan Desir

(caribbean)

...In The Valley Of My Mind


I carry black roses
Of what that has been
Rain drops wet my floor
To many cold night
Days of unfairness
I smell her fragrant
I awake to find this
In the valley of my mind

I hear the wedding bells
I see a wedding ring
Her kisses wet my lips
I see her smiling face
I hold her to find it's
In the valley of my mind

The rain drops has dried
I'm happy I can smile
Because I realize
I can get her back
Any time I want to
In the valley of my mind


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Submitted: Saturday, May 02, 2009
Edited: Friday, May 08, 2009

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  • Cindy Kreiner Sera (5/12/2009 12:31:00 PM)

    In the valley of my mind - beautiful Eyan...where precious moments, even after the pain, can be stored.... (Report) Reply

  • Sangnam Nam (5/10/2009 1:32:00 AM)

    Black roses
    beautiful imagery.....
    your floor black and the rain drops
    drip to splash the white wter drops
    to and fro (Report) Reply

  • Linda Ori (5/8/2009 5:55:00 PM)

    The mind is a powerful thing. If not for hopes and dreams, we would never attempt anything. You make the choices that define your life - 'in the valley of your mind'. Nice write, Eyan
    Linda :) (Report) Reply

  • Goran Gustafsson (5/7/2009 10:10:00 AM)

    The bottom line is that what we call reality is a kind of fiktion composed of our brain/mind. Nice romantic writing. (Report) Reply

  • Dr Hitesh Sheth (5/7/2009 6:00:00 AM)

    Very touching romantic read...........In the valley of mind, you wrote words of romantic kind........A Good Write..................... (Report) Reply

  • Naidz Ladia (5/4/2009 6:27:00 PM)

    a nice expression of love..tho it is only happening in ur imagination but at least it helps to ease ur loneliness..the fact is; ; not everything we want, we get.......naizz (Report) Reply

  • Saadat Tahir (5/3/2009 9:03:00 AM)

    wow hold on... you came on so touching and strong
    great lines
    very very appealing and identifiable
    superb write

    cheers (Report) Reply

  • rago rago (5/3/2009 12:19:00 AM)

    Amazing lines and thoroughly enjoyed reading.......... thank you for your kind sharing. (Report) Reply

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