In Exile Poem by Vonda Overlie

In Exile

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My heart yearns for my homeland when my spirit felt young and free.
Living in exile in the desert, I thirst.

Shallow breaths taken further and further apart.A shell left dying.

Looking back I remember all the closeness and wonder shared.
Now, stripped and beaten and left for dead.


Dry bones, Dry bones can you live?
Dead in body, yet in spirit I am alive.

I lay awiting the latter rains, remembering your promises.

My spirit hears your voice.
Spirit to spirit, commanding me to live.

Then the Dawn kisses me awake reminding me of hope.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Inveterating write, young lady....well constructed....i like your employment of the alternating stanzaec from couplet to single line....Very Well Done, indeed, Vonda! ~ FjR ~ ..2008..

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