Impugned Love Poem by Moushumi moushumi

Impugned Love

Rating: 5.0


Beloved imprudent
Tarnished by the parting lullaby
Ever faded, destroyed
In the sanctity
In the posterity
A lifetime achievement
Of tender heart; an absolute
Predicament, into the pell-mell array: a frightful,
Slaughtered horse
Impaled on the stile; a true disaster.


04/09/08

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sarwar Chowdhury 04 September 2008

a 10 for this touchy composition! If not loyal- Love get an ebb-tide! Falsity hurts both facing tragic end!

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Kesav Easwaran 04 September 2008

Slaughtered horse Impaled on the stile! I liked the pathetic mockery reflecting in the line...good serious write...10

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Joseph Poewhit 04 September 2008

Poem comes across with a wildness

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