If You Promise To Be By My Side! Poem by Ravi Singh

If You Promise To Be By My Side!

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when the neon lights will fade,

when I would be left tired and jade!

when time would turn its tide,

and I have no place to hide!

I ll take that in my stride,

If you promise to still be my side! !

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Vanita Thakkar 25 July 2009

Love is subtle and strong at the same time. This is a poem depicting the strength of love. So realistic, so mundane and yet so divine a feeling. Keep it up. Vanita.

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Marieta Maglas 01 July 2009

poetically subtle message..nice

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Ravi Singh

Ravi Singh

Gwalior, India
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