If Only Poem by Joey DeSantis

If Only

Rating: 5.0


Looking back on pastimes,
mistakes I wish I had never made.
Mistakes id make over again.

I chose the wrong path.
A path for self destruction.
A path of demise.
A path of sadness.

If only I was smarter,
if only I was real.
If only I had common sense.
Then maybe I'd be happy.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
David Desantis 12 July 2008

good job little bro! ! ! Glad to see your expressing your self so well

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Lynda Robson 25 June 2008

Life is full of if only's, a well written poem, and as Marvin says we do learn by our mistakes, you are not related to David DeSantis are you? Best wishes Lynda x

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Marvin Brato 25 June 2008

But you are smart my friend... learning from your mistakes, as I did! A 10.

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