If Life Was Poem by Reshma Ramesh

If Life Was

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If life was gentle and sweet,
I would have cradled it in my arms,
Alas it is bitter and a beat,
It is a path, full of deceit,
And at the end I get no receipt! !

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Joseph Poewhit 01 January 2009

There are two sides to the coin.

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Dr Hitesh Sheth 13 January 2009

If life was gentle and sweet i would have embraced her in my arms would have enamoured her by my charms.............. Alas it is deceit deceit deceit........... Good work.........

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Blue Eyes 07 January 2009

yeah that is totally true life the hardest path to go through

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Moushumi moushumi 06 January 2009

Honest feeling with if & but. Thats very spontaneous.Good you have shared.

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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 06 January 2009

lovely write short and crisp...10

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Tsira Goge 01 January 2009

The minor triumphs... But I wish you a lot of pleasure this year... Besn wishes, Tsira

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Reshma Ramesh

Reshma Ramesh

Bangalore, India
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